small documentation patch

Waldemar Brodkorb fai at waldemar-brodkorb.de
Mon Nov 16 17:33:00 CET 2009


Hi developers,

while reading the documentation, I found some minor errors.
Attached is a suggested patch.

bye
 Waldemar
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Index: fai-guide.txt
===================================================================
--- fai-guide.txt	(Revision 5655)
+++ fai-guide.txt	(Arbeitskopie)
@@ -189,7 +189,7 @@
 * Local file systems, their types, mount points and mount options
 * Software packages
 * Keyboard layout, time zone, NIS, Xorg configuration, remote file
-  systems, user accounts,printers ... 
+  systems, user accounts, printers ... 
 
 nfsroot::
 A file system located on the install server. It's the complete file
@@ -689,7 +689,7 @@
 unique MAC addresses with these commands:
 
 ----
-faiserver$ perl -ane 'print "\U$F[0]\n"' /tmp/mac.lis|sort|uniq
+faiserver$ perl -ane 'print "\U$F[0]\n"' /tmp/mac.list|sort|uniq
 ----
 
 After that, you only have to assign these MAC addresses to host names
@@ -931,7 +931,7 @@
 You can monitor the installation of all install clients with the
 command `faimond(8)`. All clients check if this daemon is running on
 the install server (or the machine defined by the variable
-+$monserver+. Then, a message is sent when a task starts and ends. The
++$monserver+). Then, a message is sent when a task starts and ends. The
 fai monitor daemon prints this messages to standard output. There's
 also a graphical frontend available, called `faimond-gui(1)`.
 
@@ -973,7 +973,7 @@
 
 Additional parameters are received from the DHCP daemon and
 the configuration space is made available via the configured method
-(an NFS mount by default) from the install server to '$FAI'. The setup
+(a NFS mount by default) from the install server to '$FAI'. The setup
 is finished after additional virtual terminals are created and the
 secure shell daemon for remote access is started on demand.
 
@@ -2001,7 +2001,7 @@
 Output of the partition tool `setup-storage(8)`.
 
 shell.log::
-Output of all shell script, that are used for customization.
+Output of all shell scripts, that are used for customization.
 
 variables.log::
 A list of all shell variables which are available during an
@@ -2642,7 +2642,7 @@
 ----
 
 - You can also delete the host entry on your install client in your
-_~/.ssh/known_hosts_ file by unsing the _ssh-keygen -R_ command.
+_~/.ssh/known_hosts_ file by using the _ssh-keygen -R_ command.
 
 - In the tasks chboot and savelog, a connection using secure shell is
 opened to the FAI server (see <<isavelog>>). To ensure that this works
@@ -2655,11 +2655,11 @@
 
 - You can calculate the IP subnet address by using the
 nice tool ipcalc. Following example gives you the notation for a class
-C network (16) when the server netork interface has the IP address
+C network (24) when the server network interface has the IP address
 123.45.6.123
 
 ----
-$ ipcalc -nb 123.45.6.123 16|grep Network:
+$ ipcalc -nb 123.45.6.123 24|grep Network:
 ----
 
 - You can merge two directories which contain configuration information,


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